Some interesting effects here - I like the digital zooms, although remind me to show you how to solve the "black border" problem. Some interesting camerawork; watch the hanging edits (e.g. when your actor is waiting to start after the camera has rolled). Remind me also to work with you on editing the audio so it doesn't jump. Nice pan. Unfortunately, some of the dialogue is drowned out. Freaky credits! Look for opportunities to improve the continuity in your next one, since you have some good ideas. In terms of levels, my feeling here is that you are in Level 2 - if you look at the criteria, you'll notice that a lot of the comments I made about the first piece today match yours; very imaginative and creative, but the editing is a little glitchy. A longer evaluation would improve your Blog - try to go into more details about your piece, both pros and cons.
Some interesting effects here - I like the digital zooms, although remind me to show you how to solve the "black border" problem. Some interesting camerawork; watch the hanging edits (e.g. when your actor is waiting to start after the camera has rolled). Remind me also to work with you on editing the audio so it doesn't jump. Nice pan. Unfortunately, some of the dialogue is drowned out. Freaky credits! Look for opportunities to improve the continuity in your next one, since you have some good ideas.
ReplyDeleteIn terms of levels, my feeling here is that you are in Level 2 - if you look at the criteria, you'll notice that a lot of the comments I made about the first piece today match yours; very imaginative and creative, but the editing is a little glitchy. A longer evaluation would improve your Blog - try to go into more details about your piece, both pros and cons.